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anonymouse21 |
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Sounds good... but about the name "Cavaan", there's a character with a similar name in, I think http://www.amazon.com/Naming-Pellinor-Book-1/dp/0763626392 this book. The guy's name is
"Cadvan" and he's a bard.
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crystalchief |
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As long as the names are only similar,then,thats all right.As long as they don't have similar ages and traits(16,blonde,etc.)
As for the future,there are two sections of the future: the Color Factions age the far future/Age of the Angry World the far future and the prosperous age are my main focuses. The main character of the far future is a man named Aloi.He has amnesia of his life before his twentieth birthday and his past life(which he doesn't even know about If your wondering what "angry world" means,it means that,because of the overadvanced societies and races,the world is throwing itself into chaos.Aloi is a peaceful man,and he doesn't want the end of the world,so he fights to satisfy the world,and build a repeat of the prosperous age. |
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Wolfgang Kaiser |
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A bullet catcher?
Niiice. "Kidnapping Nubile Victorian Ladies Since 1867" |
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crystalchief |
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I would like to let you know that my obsessions come in waves.For example, I could be obsessed with something because it suddenly came to me and I could be
obsessed with it for a long time.
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Ablean Buckslinger |
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What if we don't wanna ask anything?
Everything we do is a choice. Oatmeal or cereal, highway or side streets, kiss her or keep her, we
make choices and we live with the consequences. If someone gets hurt along the way we ask for forgiveness, it's the best anyone can do.
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anonymouse21 |
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But... you said that you liked Ninjas better, but that's ok- I will gladly support you in your switch to pirate-hood.
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crystalchief |
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You don't have to ask...
and yes,I did use to like ninjas better,but I didn't like the idea of ancient Asian stealth warriors,I just call anyone who uses needles,shuriken,thin chains,darts and knives in battle a ninja...not anymore!Now I'll just call them...well,not important right now. Yes,I have changed to pirates,but the pirates in my world use more primitive,yet more high-tech guns than today.Pirates wear rugged,ripped clothing from battles.The wear treasures that they find.They sail the southern seas(the safest place from Gaelruhc and his minions).Pirates didn't exist during the Age of the Angry world. |
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crystalchief |
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Obviously,my world has several plots,places,and times so If you get confused,tell me...try not to get confused.
Also...WARNING:SPOILERS AHEAD!!! I you don't want to know about the spoilers,don't read this,but your missing out. Anyone who wants to know how the Tyrant,Color Factions,Age of the Angry World ends,read ahead. Tyrant Age Ending: Gaelruhc dies and his influence is broken.The people begin to rebuild the settlements that once existed and they cure the areas that were corrupted(including a village named Ru Ta).The monsters still exist in the world,but they're lost and looking for a leader. Color Factions Age:First of all,the main villain of the Color Factions age was a Meorn-Avianti hybrid named Andri.Andri was a dragoon and died during an airship fight when his leg was cut.Andri lost his balance and fell to his death. Age of the Angry World ending: Aloi(the main character) finds a material called Impurium(named undecided).This creates a being called Dark Aloi.Dark Aloi is fighting for the same thing as Aloi,but in a way thats much more harsh to the world than Aloi's efforts.Aloi kills Dark Aloi in a fight and uses the Impurium to turn back time to the point when Andri's leg was about to be cut.Knowing what would happen(Aloi is a reincarnation of Andri,so turning back time gave Andri Aloi's memories),Andri jumps off the airship and lands on his dragon.This moment actually brought an end to the end of the Age of the Angry World and the Color Factions age. Sorry if the details or plot are skimpy or just not there,I'm not doing well with writing this stuff down,I stopped for reasons unknown,I should probably start writing things again.Also,the turning back time in the Age of the Angry World and the change at the end of the CF Age created a new Prosperous age called the New Age. |
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anonymouse21 |
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alright then.
So the main character is... a reincarnation of the villain? That confused me for a little while really because it just isn't typical- which really isn't bad. Also, I found it interesting that Aloi fought of Dark Alio- rather like fighting off the bad bit of himself, correct? Yeah, people have used similar things, but i always like that idea. Dunno why . Yeah! |
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crystalchief |
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Thank you!!
Also,at the moment when Aloi went back in time,and then Andri jumped off the airship,he no-longer was a villain,knowing what would happen,he "disappeared" and was never seen again,ending the Color Factions age. Spoiler:warning!!!! Andri,while he was alive in the New Age,was hiding. He dyed his hair and cut it,to fit in until he died. |
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