Thank you reading it, and critiquing it also. Much appreciated. Although I don't agree with some things you said, I do agree with others. Your not bursting my ego or bubble or anything. I was rather surprised no-one had said anything negative yet. That happens to every writer. But just keep in mind, I wrote this in half an hour, and didn't really think much of it. Just thought I'd post it for a bit of fun. Finally, don't apologize. People say sorry too much these days, lowering the meaning of a true apology.

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Signed, Lincoln G. Bansob, AKA the Mokey.
With a little help from his friend monty (antsin.