Story! http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/topic/2050/t/Story-.html en-us Copyright 2006, Yuku feeds@yuku.com (FeedMaster) webmaster@yuku.com (WebMaster) Mon, 07 Apr 2008 15:54:44 GMT Mon, 09 Jun 2008 17:15:29 GMT Yuku Feeds 1.0 http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/tech/rss 60 Yuku http://static.yuku.com//feed/bypass/images/button-yuku.png http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/topic/2050/t/Story-.html Yuku - free hosted forums and profiles 88 31 {pics-1.1 "http://www.icra.org/ratingsv02.html" l gen true for "http://yuku.com" r (nz 1 vz 1 lz 1 oz 1 cz 1 ) "http://www.rsac.org/ratingsv01.html" l gen true for "http://yuku.com" r (n 0 s 0 v 0 l 0 )) Search Search Domain q http://yuku.com/search/direct/ <![CDATA[ Re: Story! ]]> http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/19117/t/Story-.html#reply-19117 feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/19117 Mon, 09 Jun 2008 17:15:29 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: Story! ]]> http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/19006/t/Story-.html#reply-19006 invisi-plant = if this is a proper name of the beast, it should have a capital letter
Gladioli = this does not need a capital

The first line just sounds a bit shaky ... it's not phrased quite right I don't think...

I zapped it with an advanced gadget of mine = are you going to name said gadget? Sounds a bit pretentious
"I have your love, Bernard Agrenly." = this reads like, "I... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Ablean Buckslinger) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/19006 Tue, 03 Jun 2008 23:21:50 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: Story! ]]> http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/17418/t/Story-.html#reply-17418
and yes, that is very useful. I'll just have to figure out exactly how to use it.
And was it any good? I am getting anxious here, I have to know if it was any good or not... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/17418 Mon, 07 Apr 2008 16:33:43 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: Story! ]]> http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/17416/t/Story-.html#reply-17416
I did indeed read Super Tate. One question:

"It was alright," He said, with a lamo smile on his face, "and you?"


Do you mean "lame" here, or is that a deliberate neologism? ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Wolfgang Kaiser) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/17416 Mon, 07 Apr 2008 16:26:10 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: Story! ]]> http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/17415/t/Story-.html#reply-17415 feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/17415 Mon, 07 Apr 2008 16:21:29 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: Story! ]]> http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/17413/t/Story-.html#reply-17413
Replace the () with [], and it's gold. ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Wolfgang Kaiser) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/17413 Mon, 07 Apr 2008 16:19:37 GMT <![CDATA[ Story! ]]> http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/topic/2050/t/Story-.html
Oh, and how does everyone post links without actually posting the whole link? I am so confused... yeah.
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