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Just keep writing! ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Lethe Gray) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/16799 Mon, 10 Mar 2008 17:18:13 GMT http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/16779/t/A-new-story-written-by-a-new-person-.html#reply-16779 feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/16779 Sat, 08 Mar 2008 21:46:01 GMT http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/16775/t/A-new-story-written-by-a-new-person-.html#reply-16775
I'd like to know how their society is the way it is. It is obviously still kind of mired in the lords-and-ladies style in one way, but also if they've got a girl attending school, that's something that's very different than what one would expect out of a similar "real life" world. ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Lethe Gray) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/16775 Sat, 08 Mar 2008 20:59:24 GMT http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/16710/t/A-new-story-written-by-a-new-person-.html#reply-16710 feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/16710 Thu, 06 Mar 2008 22:50:47 GMT http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/16689/t/A-new-story-written-by-a-new-person-.html#reply-16689 feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/16689 Thu, 06 Mar 2008 08:14:17 GMT http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/16684/t/A-new-story-written-by-a-new-person-.html#reply-16684 know how to pronounce, it, aye, it's no big deal. But consider this: How would we, mere readers, have known how to pronounce it before you told us? Hell, I didn't even know how to pronounce "homage" before somebody told me, and that's got a seat in the bleedin' OED.

Unless you're planning on pulling a Tolkien and setting out all the rules of pronunciation in overblown appendices that every JRRT fan is proud of having... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Wolfgang Kaiser) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/16684 Wed, 05 Mar 2008 22:51:51 GMT http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/16679/t/A-new-story-written-by-a-new-person-.html#reply-16679 feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/16679 Wed, 05 Mar 2008 21:52:41 GMT http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/16678/t/A-new-story-written-by-a-new-person-.html#reply-16678
Imagine a stranger being hired to read your work out loud to people who can't read. Will they be able to smoothly speak everything? That actually helps for other reasons too (when you're not sure how a sentence needs to be assembled, if it's too long, or where the emphasis should be on... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Lethe Gray) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/16678 Wed, 05 Mar 2008 21:49:48 GMT http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/16669/t/A-new-story-written-by-a-new-person-.html#reply-16669 feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/16669 Wed, 05 Mar 2008 16:39:59 GMT http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/reply/16665/t/A-new-story-written-by-a-new-person-.html#reply-16665 Nice work! ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Lethe Gray) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/sreply/16665 Wed, 05 Mar 2008 10:45:58 GMT http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/topic/1988/t/A-new-story-written-by-a-new-person-.html
Plus, excuse any of the "microsoft office" thingys if there's still any left. I copied and pasted this off of word. As for that weird line thing that appears later on, i have no idea what that is. Keep in mind that this is only the first part of my story, and i haven't finished it yet. Tell me if... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) http://seventhsanctumsector.yuku.com/topic/1988 Tue, 04 Mar 2008 21:28:24 GMT