Writing

Heaven - Hell - New Realm

feeds@yuku.com (HeritageDeath) — Fri, 02 May 2008 21:15:15 GMT

Ya classic war of the worlds, except without the real war I guess. OK here's the plot, what I got so far. Need help with a few things

1.MC is banished to hell, the reasons for it = he was an assassin-in-training. His first real kill, fails. The king that ordered him to kill routes him out, saying that he had nothing to do with it and playing the innocent roll. {The royal blood line...

So I've been thinking...

feeds@yuku.com (Lilith Nightwalker) — Wed, 30 Apr 2008 12:22:12 GMT

This idea actually has some backstory to it.

I'm the youngest of three siblings. When I was younger, my two older brothers went to bed later than I did, and as such, the light outside my room was often left on when I was in bed with the light out. This light from under my door combined with my nightlight and whatever other light might have been leaking into my room cast some rather interesting shadows on the ceiling. In fact, the reading lamp combined in a certain way with my...

How's this sound?

feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) — Mon, 21 Apr 2008 20:38:13 GMT

This is the beginning of the story that I came up with, so please tell me how it sounds so far. Thanks!

Chapter one-

I am not normal. I am anything but normal. Of course, I appear to be, but that's only because you haven't seen me wearing crazy hats through the grocery store yet. I

Silently the Walrus walks
The margins of the sea;
His old black eyes are full of wrath
His muzzle, whiskery.

His flesh is raw, his tusks as long
As an hour away from thee;
His trumpet is a haunting cry
That rocks the Polar Sea.

He stalks without impediment,
(A league beneath the sea)
The clams beneath the sediment
Sleeping chthonically.

Time is odd when you are dreaming. Sometimes the whole night seems to go by in a flash or for others, it may have seemed like hours, but the clock only ticked away a few seconds. The same goes for life; young teens anticipate the day they are on their own and out of the house but elders wished they could experience their youth once...

Stories of Super Tate

feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) — Mon, 07 Apr 2008 15:54:44 GMT

Here's a link to my Super Tate stories... and ya know what? They're better than my other ones, definitely. The other stories that I have posted here are... not that great. But there you are! And by the way, this one is a comedy... hahahah. http://fhq.forumer.com/blogs/super-tate/83-life-teenage-super-hero-undercover.html

Oh, and how does everyone post links without actually posting the whole link? I am so confused... yeah.

Shadowmill (adult-horror-modern)

feeds@yuku.com (Lethe Gray) — Mon, 07 Apr 2008 13:48:11 GMT

I'm going to be posting my rather long, extremely suddenly written story "Shadowmill" for you. It has not been edited, so parts might need a little fixing. It is a modern, magic, horror type story however
WARNING this story contains adult situations including sexual encounters.
Please use caution, this story is not intended for people who don't...

My very random story,

feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) — Fri, 28 Mar 2008 13:01:40 GMT

Lyrit was laying on the ground, looking up at the sky. There were birds, somewhere off in the distance, and she couldn't quite grasp that the soaring v's could possibly be a real living being.

Lyrit had been lying this way for hours, doing nothing more than dreaming. Dreaming, what she always did. At times, her parents would complain about the dreaming, but it seemed that it could not be stopped. Lyrit was a natural dreamer, one who was meant to dream.

There were...

And... the second part of my story.... :)

feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) — Mon, 10 Mar 2008 18:16:58 GMT

Yet another bit of my story... and if you haven't read the first part, you probably should as this will make no sense.

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That night, she thought about what she had overheard L'quir and the other nobles saying. It was a strange thought, having L'quir be the new king. Siri hadn't ever known a time when the...

A new story- written by a new person.

feeds@yuku.com (anonymouse21) — Tue, 04 Mar 2008 21:28:24 GMT

ok, so here's my story- i hope that it's alright... i have always wondered whether or not my writing's any good. anyhow, here it is, i hope that you like it!

Plus, excuse any of the "microsoft office" thingys if there's still any left. I copied and pasted this off of word. As for that weird line thing that appears later on, i have no idea what that is. Keep in mind that this is only the first part of my story, and i haven't finished it yet. Tell me if...

Exercises, for Lack of a Better Word

feeds@yuku.com (Wolfgang Kaiser) — Fri, 29 Feb 2008 22:58:12 GMT

I'll be 100% honest here: I'm not entirely sure what these are. To a certain extent, the idea was to use alliteration, assonance, and consonance to write short sentences that read half like poetry and half like prose; but a lot of it is just a stream-of-consciousness sort of deal, whereby I wrote down any word that seemed like it should come next, to fit the "meter" or the sound of the phrase, or just to satisfy my own bizarre subconscious. I'm not happy with a lot of...

Random Writings Daily

feeds@yuku.com (Lord DragonFang) — Mon, 04 Feb 2008 02:28:48 GMT

Right. I think it's time I tried something to kickstart my writing. I've barely written anything in ages. So what I'm going to do is write something, anything really, every day this week and post it in this thread. You can comment and critique as much as you like, and I'd encourage it to try and hone my skills back into form. Hopefully I'll get the inspiration to keep writing in earnest after this, if not...perhaps another week!

So this first little piece is the...

Sgt. So and So's New Piece... woooo!

feeds@yuku.com (Sgt So and So) — Sun, 20 Jan 2008 18:40:45 GMT

Righteo, now that I've made it back here to the Sanctum, I thought I might as well deposit my most recent work.

Well, the piece takes place in early 1945 as the Russians are beginning the final push into Berlin during World War Two. The perspective is that of a jaded Panzergrenadier feldwebel (Sergeant), who leads one last patrol against the first waves to save his home. His wife, on the other hand, sees that the battle has already been lost, and hopes to find her way to the...

Should I bother?

feeds@yuku.com (The Lady of Darkness) — Sat, 19 Jan 2008 23:50:15 GMT

Since there seems to be a revival of the Creative Discussion boards, I thought I'd post something. This is something that is a bit of an anomaly - it is not the kind of thing that I write at all. But it exists. I'm a bit disillusioned at the moment and wonder if I'm wasting my time on it. Any feedback would be much appreciated - I'm sorry to be posting a first draft, but I'm hoping that it isn't as bad as I think. Be as harsh as you need to be, and harsher again....

An as of yet untitled work, perhaps headed for the scrap heap.

feeds@yuku.com (Gem Sealed Emperor) — Tue, 15 Jan 2008 13:18:14 GMT

Title

It was a clear, dark night, and the moon, a waning crescent, cast far less light than I would've liked as I waved goodbye to my coworkers and walked from the fast food restaurant where I worked. I walked home in the darkness, hat turned backwards, shirt untucked, reflecting on the summer that had passed and the changes to come with college in three days.

Lost in my thoughts as I was, I failed to...

Yo, I'm back

feeds@yuku.com (Sgt So and So) — Tue, 15 Jan 2008 12:56:02 GMT

Greetings again, fellow creative peoples!

It's been a while, but I'm back. I wonder if anybody is still the same around here...

Forever Dreaming

feeds@yuku.com (Vortex Duck) — Sun, 13 Jan 2008 12:05:36 GMT

This is a poem I wrote about a year after my first dog died, when I was about 7 or 8. It takes me a lot of courage to upload it like this, since I still cry about her, even nine years later. Her death is probably the most vivid memory I have from that age.

The Boy was excited as he sat in the car.
''Where are we going?'' he said.
''We're taking the dog to the vet,'' said his mum,
''we think something's wrong with her...

Sanctum Haiku!

feeds@yuku.com (Lord DragonFang) — Mon, 07 Jan 2008 06:30:20 GMT

Firing randomly
Like sanctum's generators
My neurons create

A name is needed
Call upon the random one
Can't pronounce Schypgh

The Seventh Sanctum
Blind dates for my muse are good
But I'm lonely too

Infinite monkeys
What a bad idea that is
I'd rather ferrets

I had an idea
It got lost down a plot hole
Now who put that there?

Fired his...

Blurb for one of my Ongoing Novels

feeds@yuku.com (Vortex Duck) — Fri, 04 Jan 2008 13:43:52 GMT
I'm going to post the blurb I wrote for one of my ongoing novel(la)s. The book, on the whole, was going to be rather good, I imagined at one point, but I never get round to actually finishing what I start. Should have something published before the end of this year, though.

Quote:
Armed with only his wits, a spellbook, a wannabe Ninja, God (of a sorts), and a...